2) From my last feedback I really liked how they noticed the improvements from last time in both the specific details as well as the hand gestures. I also really enjoyed how all were able to enjoy the pitch which I believe is key when doing an elevator pitch
3) Since the feedback was so positive I merely improved on the same speech. I tried to improve the pace as much as I could as the speech is almost memorized at this point. I was also able to take more control over the camera as much as I could.
Hey Manuel,
ReplyDeleteYou did a fantastic job on your third elevator pitch. It is obvious that you have taken your peers' feedback and advice into consideration in terms of how to improve your pitch. Hand gestures are essential in giving a speech of any type. They can be used to add emphasis on a certain point or as a direction tool. Once again, excellent job on your pitch!
Hey Manuel,
ReplyDeleteI believe you did a fantastic job getting the message through of what your company is and what it does in this pitch. The pace and structure of the pitch were also very well done and you made very good use of your body language. Overall, you did a really great job of improving your pitch throughout the class!
Hey Manuel,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on this third elevator speech. The only comment I would make was that I noticed you swaying left and right. Beyond that, you made your business idea and concept abundantly clear and interesting. You came across as attentive, intrigued, and aware of an issue and a solution. Your structure was perfect and your confidence was there. Overall, great job!