I think you did a great job for your elevator pitch. The only constructive criticism I would give to you, is that you need to make more eye contact with the camera. It seemed as though you were reading something most of the pitch, and I am not sure if you actually were or not, but the audience wants to feel as though your eyes are always on them. I would set aside several main points you want to make, and then go over those in your head as you vocally explain the highlights in your video. Overall you did a great job though.
Great job on your elevator pitch! It was great, but for the purposes of this peer review I'm going to focus on constructive feedback. Firstly, I think you should be more confident! I agreed with everything you said but you sounded unsure of yourself. Secondly, I think you should try to look at the camera a bit more, but that was just a personal observation. Lastly, I think everything you said was perfect (explained your opportunity well), but it sounded a bit monotonous. Besides those few exceptions, I thought you did a great job on your elevator pitch!
Dear Manuel,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job for your elevator pitch. The only constructive criticism I would give to you, is that you need to make more eye contact with the camera. It seemed as though you were reading something most of the pitch, and I am not sure if you actually were or not, but the audience wants to feel as though your eyes are always on them. I would set aside several main points you want to make, and then go over those in your head as you vocally explain the highlights in your video. Overall you did a great job though.
Hey Manuel,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your elevator pitch! It was great, but for the purposes of this peer review I'm going to focus on constructive feedback. Firstly, I think you should be more confident! I agreed with everything you said but you sounded unsure of yourself. Secondly, I think you should try to look at the camera a bit more, but that was just a personal observation. Lastly, I think everything you said was perfect (explained your opportunity well), but it sounded a bit monotonous. Besides those few exceptions, I thought you did a great job on your elevator pitch!